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Spoiler Alert!: First Kisses

        OK, this is one Crazy Tree house, like crazy good! Three friends go up to their childhood hangout to watch the fireworks on the Fourth of July and as the title foreshadows, there's going to be some kissing. Is that predictable, yeah. Is it still awesome, heck yeah!  The main character,15-year-old  Jillian, is trying to accomplish her summer goals, one of which, is to have her very first kiss. Her two best friends,  brother's James and Caden, are willing to her help her along. That, my friends, is where it gets really interesting (hint,hint). You  know puberty has punched you in the face when you find yourself doing naughty things in a tree!
        There was one small twist to this story that I really did not see coming and it kept me interested until the end. All in all I was thoroughly entertained and would recommend it to anyone in a bad mood. I really hope friendship prevails with these three, and according to the author, we will be seeing much more of these characters. My fingers are crossed!

Favorite line: "Penises Everywhere"

This Short fifteen minute story was written by the beautiful Dina Littner, who is probably a lovely lady and an avid dog lover so go read the story on Amazon>>CLICK HERE!<< and tell me what you think!

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