Spoiler Alert! Linger

Not gonna lie, I did click on this title because it reminded me of The Cranberries song (with the same title if you didn't know) But I was pleasantly surprised once I started to read it! I was immediately sucked into the story and began to visualize everything going on. I don't know about you guys, but once I start to visualize while I'm reading the rest of the world becomes invisible and I can only focus on the story at hand. This has gotten me into trouble a time or two but it usually means I'm reading a very good story (hint).
This story follows 16-year-old Evee who lives in a world where mysterious creatures they call 'Takers' steal humans souls and leave them without personalities and left for dead. When she finds out that her best-friend and secret crush, Jaeger, soul has been taken she decides to take action and find out what they want. With the help of a voice in her head, who happens to be Jaeger's little sister they try to figure out how to get souls back into they're regular bodies.
I do wish that the heroine could have figured out how to get everyone's souls back to their bodies but that's really the only complaint I have about this story, I loved it from beginning to end!

Favorite Line: "No, they suck out peoples' souls; I'd put that at the top of the Not-Quite-Human list."

Read it for yourself >>HERE!<< and tell me what you think. P.S. it's totally FREE!

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